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Poem Book: Beneath A Laughing Face

Submitted by Pravs J on Tuesday, 2 October 200712 Comments

Beneath A Laughing Face



As I remember the times we spend besides the lake,
I just wonder, was it love or was the feeling fake?

The fun rides, beach blues and the lush garden greens,
Without you around everything is not just seen.

Giving up everything, just for your sake,
Is there anything, that you forgot to take?

Waiting up all the time besides the phone to ring,
Catching to the tunes of the songs we sing.

As my heart breaks, I try to fall asleep,
But still all our memories make me flip.

With everyday, the feeling for you gets tender,
And every moment, makes my love grow stronger.

I really couldn’t stand the pressure or the pain,
Not talking to or not seeing you, makes me go insane.

I really wished, I felt that we were still one,
do you remember, all the laughter and the fun?

Sharing my love to someone else is not my case,
So I hide my broken heart beneath a laughing face.

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12 Comments »

  • Nidhi said:

    very beautiful writing! I love this!

    - 4 October 2007 at 9:08 am
  • kiki said:

    So true…wish my love was reading this..and he realises my love for him…wish he comes back ..

    - 5 October 2007 at 8:16 am
  • cham cham said:

    so true… i wish my ex sees this and realizes how much his love meant to
    me!!!

    - 17 October 2007 at 3:03 am
  • V said:

    Expressed beautifully !

    - 10 December 2007 at 6:38 am
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    - 30 December 2007 at 7:50 pm
  • geeta khanchandani said:

    Beneath the laughing face itself says it all…

    - 10 January 2008 at 4:36 am
  • heny said:

    so beautiful, well expressed.

    - 17 February 2008 at 1:11 pm
  • Mich said:

    Very very true.
    I wish the one who i am waiting was reading, understanding,
    appreciate my feelings for him
    and forgive, make an effort
    I wish very much that he comes back ..

    - 11 July 2008 at 10:43 am
  • N.M.Fazil said:

    Its a realy nice thought

    - 11 September 2008 at 2:26 am
  • Ashwini said:

    Ouch!

    Its painful… very well expressed!
    wish my love will read this..and he realises my love for him…wish he comes back ..

    - 23 March 2009 at 9:12 am
  • Habs said:

    very beautiful..

    - 3 May 2009 at 2:47 am
  • kamlesh said:

    very very true words …wish i could read out the lines to her…wish she comes back…i miss u :(

    - 12 August 2009 at 12:32 pm

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